hallo,
ich übe gerade das Comment schreiben und hab mir versucht einfach mal ein Thema und ein paar Argumente zu überlegen.
(Rechtschreibfehler sind nur durchs schnelle abtippen, geht mir nur um die formulierung)
hoffe mich dadurch zu verbessern. danke schonmal

The following text is a comment about the question whether should move manufactories to poor countries.
Personally, I believe that there are some positive and negativ aspects for manufactorer to produce their goods in poor countries, but generally i think that they shouldnt move to poor countries.

Of Course, some people could argue that it is easyer to produce good in poor contries, because there are weak controls and low taxes. as a result of this manufactorer could push up her profits by pushing down the labour costs and have only a little attention to enviromental effects. On the Contrary in Germany they have to pay high taxes and there is a hight air pollution control.
On the other hand, if manufactories move to poor countries, some people in germany will lose their job. In addition in poor coutries often bad working conditions. For istance worker get only minimum wages and work with dangerous chamicals without protective clothing.The question is: Could manufacturer live with this unsrupulous way for producing?
In conclusion, it seems to me that there are some big advantages for manufactories to move to poor countries. Naturally, there are big disadvanatges too. Howerver, i believe everybody should answer this question according to his or her own opinion. Personally, i think that it is the best weh manufacturings stay in her country.


ENDE

(Mir fällt grad selbst auch, das der Text nicht wirklich zur Frage passt, bin ich wohl etwas sehr von abgekommen, hoff ihr korriegiert mir den Stil trotzdem.) DANKE
habs wirklich nötig